Although I can see clearly an ability to detail and build, I am still not fully convinced that you should have the Advanced Builder rank, despite those references.
From your builds, I can see that you are great at creating Terrain for your structures and are good at detailing it. However, I still feel as if there is a need for you to prove that you are able to create Structure on a larger scale, as your plots generally only consist of 6 or so houses , whereas other applicants have made many more or even larger structures, with less terrain. In addition, your plots do not appear to be fully finished and the application rushed; you had stated that you had not finished parts of Avia. We also would expect for the Interiors of buildings to be completed, even if it's relatively simple detail.
From your maturity; especially today, I do not feel as if you have improved from what I have heard, although I had not witnessed the initial arguments which resulted in your declination during the last application. From today, your attitude and politeness to other players has been seen in a negative light. I feel as if you do need to learn that you shouldn't be calling the work of others "painful" to look at, as this may cause upset or anger for them, as they have been trying. In addition, I feel as if you should respect the decisions of other people, instead of saying "I'm better at Redstone,"or complaining about how something is done: "There's a reason you buy a smaller computer..."
Ultimately, I feel as if you need to reflect and take some more time to change, based on how you interact with other members of the server. I'm going to go with a
-1; 0 being for the building (small changes),
-1 being for the attitude mentioned.
{3 weeks is over}
Olive44 Maethia Mulbery SirComputer
Don't compare peoples builds, its basically saying: "his builds are better so he got adv and you didn't", that is one of the rudest thing to say to someone, i shouldn't be judged on comparison to someone else, i should be judged in comparison to the build criteria.
Don't just assume i'm being to rude to someone sarcasm doesn't carry well across text where there is no tone of voice, the circumstance was that Choco was making a red stone system which i had a more compact version off which was more reliable, you took it to assume that when i said it was painful that it was shit, it wasn't shit it was a good system which i could have improved, and yes it was his plot but i volunteered to do it, i was meant to be sleeping but Choco woke me up to make something and then half way through he stopped me to make a system that was not the best it could have been.
when i said "I'm better at red stone", CHOCO EVEN AGREED, you cant say that i was being rude to them if they agreed, it kind of makes your point null and void, i do respect other peoples decisions; if they are good ones, i'm not going to just stand here and let someone murder someone else at their decision i'm going to try and stop it!, its only natural.
"whereas other applicants have made many more or even larger structures, with less terrain.", yes and mine has more terrain with less structure, its kind of a scale really :I, i do try to put structures into my builds but i'm not the best at wide spread structures, i add terrain features to give my builds more emphasis and allow a better sense of exploration.
"From your maturity; especially today", especially today, where i have been especially irritated due to the actions of others, if people are going to irritate me i'm going to get irritated, it may seem petty and immature,
"From today, your attitude and politeness to other players has been seen in a negative light", that's because you are looking at it in a negative light, i say stuff like, "this red stone is bad", i'm not saying it because i hate the person who made it or that i'm in a bad mood, i'm saying it because it is actually bad redstoning.
IN CONCLUSION,
i will look over my builds and see what needs improving,
i'll make sure to tell people that what i am saying is actually what i'm saying or not just so i don't piss people off due to their misunderstanding...
i'll take into account how the staff cant tell sarcasm from actual talk...