[Withdrawn] [Map] Egypt

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FrenchSanta12

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Name of the map:
Egypt

Creator: FrenchSanta12

Biome: Dessert

Screenshots:

overview

inside the pyramid

cave and timer number 1

timer number 2

timer number 3

timer number 4

Included chests: 1- potato and bone 2- seven sugar 3- three carpets.

No-break or no-drop blocks? Glowstone no drop.

Extra information? I had a totally different picture in my mind about this map.. to be
honest it didn’t turn out like expected but it’s still pretty descent in my opinion, another sand map for RoF. Also if calling the map Egypt is too stereotypical call it “Ancient” or “Ancient_Egypt”. Also I want ocelots in this map if it gets accepted. Also I'm still not sure about the block that the pyramids are made from.. if you have any suggestions tell me.

/warp Egypt on buildbox

Senebti
 
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DarkHender

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I think the map itself is way to plain and to be honest I feel its too small.
You should add more detail to the pyramids on the inside and why may I ask is the pyramids made out of mushroom?
I feel this map was rather rushed and I think you could do a lot better, I know you can.
 
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Harold1995

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I'd agree with the 2 above this could be improved alot:)
The idea is really nice also the ocelots (cats) is what i like:3 Try maybe adding roads more higher mountains and a more detailed pyramid! I like it:)
 
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DarkHender

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I hope you don't plan to keep the bedrock wall.
No the bedrock behind isn't part of the map, I just put it there to devide between maps.

Get it more vertical-based as well. Feels incomplete.
I don't quite understand
You should add more detail to the pyramids on the inside and why may I ask is the pyramids made out of mushroom?
I don't know what block should the pyramid be made from.. I tried sorts of clay and wool but still not sure..
I would say sandstone.
 

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I may not be able to make the perfect comment I want for this cause I can't word it out much, but I think it is not that much appealing to the eye because of the usual repetitive-yellowish-sandy look . I would like to point out to use a variety of blocks so that it won't look too one-colored and usually, when I hear the word Egypt, what comes to mind is pillars, temples, big pyramids, hieroglyphics, Lapis, gold, pharaohs and so much more.

I like the concept, but I feel it may need more variety and widening. Good job, though :)
 

brownlee123

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This map looks amazing, but I do agree that there needs to be...more.
There just isn't much, is all I'm saying. When I first saw this map, I thought, "If there's something massive under that tallest pyramid, this will be an amazing map." I was kind of disappointed when I saw there wasn't really anything there...
I will say, those tents look amazing. Honestly, it all looks amazing, absolutely amazing. But if you could expound upon that, this map would absolutely ROCK.
 
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