[Withdrawn] Swale

[Dess]

Name of the map: Swale
Creator(s): Just me Dessern5
Size: X: 80 Z: 81 Y: 93 (to the bottom of the water)
Round length: 35 minutes
Locations and suggested timing for timers: I will do all of these in a screenshot so they won't actually be beneath me. As for time between timers could I have it be 4 minutes? All timers are marked with red wool.

Spoiler: Timers

Timer one

Timer 2

Timer 3

Timer 4

Timer 5

Timer 6

Timer 7

Screenshots <include at least one screenshot of all timers>: If you want to see this map up close it is in terrain (hope this is okay) type /warp marsh_land

Spoiler: pictures

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Thank you all for the time any and all feedback is appreciated!

 

[Ronaldo]

The adminium walls will most likely be removed since we were taking care of that issue with the other maps. Other then that, will have to take a closer look sometime soon in game.

 

[Dess]

I know that the walls will be removed I just left them there for now because it helped with knowing the boundaries.

 

[Ronaldo]

Mmk, well the map isn't bad, but I have a small problem when I see maps that are built like this:

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Not trying to be harsh, but it shows a state of laziness and a lack of creativity when someone takes part of a terrain and builds maps in this sort of way. Some features of terrain wouldn't be bad to have as a part of a map, and I understand that you built the bottom half of around this area, but I personally just don't like it when someone decides to take a part of a terrain, modifies it a bit, and claims it as a map that they worked on with "full effort". I'm sorry, but I have to give this a -1 for the lack of effort that was given to it.

 

[Dess]

I understand where you are coming from on this but the only reason I had done that is because building terrain is a big weakness of mine. I could go through this again and try to edit around the upper level. Understand though that for asthetic purposes not much would be changed.

 

[Shande]

This is just a swamp biome with little huts.

You should really create your own terrain instead of just boxing in an area and calling it a map. Work with worldedit a bit and look at some of Numberplays/iiDeathcookies guides on the forums. I'm sure they will help you a bit.

 

[Ogarci]

I understand where you are coming from on this but the only reason I had done that is because building terrain is a big weakness of mine. I could go through this again and try to edit around the upper level. Understand though that for asthetic purposes not much would be changed.

Theres a ton of people out there that want to build maps and don't know where to start. Finding a partner and doing a collaboration is a fun thing for all parties involved, and you learn a thing or two from them while it happens. Finding someone that knows terrain and having them cooperatively make a map with you could prove to be a very valuable thing.

 

[Dess]

Okay, after thinking about it I will start the top part over so I will withdraw this for now.

 

[Sploorky]

right-o