Survivor Clipperton
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Challenge Results
First of all I want to say these stories were incredibly awesome. Youa ll did a great job.
The winners if this challenge are... [BCOLOR=#33cccc]Elsa Tribe [/BCOLOR]and [BCOLOR=#00ff00]Fighting Potatoes Tribe[/BCOLOR].
I'll explain the reasons. Elsa Tribe won thanks to their ending. It started okay to me. I thought it was going to be those cliche stories where they're all stting around a fire telling a story. But the end got me. It accomplished what I asked. Which was to give that scary factor.
Fighting Potatoes won thanks to all the weird and mysterious things that were happening to each one of them. People were suffering. The best part is that it never really explains what was causing that. Which makes it very scary. Also, the deaths are very creepy.
So congratulations Nottykitten, Toilet, Endersteve, Xfolo, Raxo, Alpha, Shanebat, Cronaldo and Faliara. For winning this challenge your Tribe won't have to vote out anyone. And you'll be taken on a Helicopter Ride around the Island.
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That means [BCOLOR=#ff00ff]Peaceful Pumpkins[/BCOLOR] and [BCOLOR=#ffff00]Kristoff Tribe[/BCOLOR] will have to vote out someone from their own Tribe.
Kristoff Tribe, you story was very interesting. I kind of Serial Killer/Crazy guy killing people. It was good but I didn't felt that scary factor in the story. Killing doesn't really makes a story creepy.
Peacful Pumpkins, if I had to choose a story to win (leaving out the scary factor) you guys would've won for sure. I erm... almost teared up. Friends fighting ro survive these things. All of them dying except one. The ending was very sad and perfect. But again, wheres the scary part? Very touching though!
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Here are the stories if you want to read them:
Elsa Tribe
TOILET: So have you guys heard of the story of the Clipperton Ghost?
ENDER: Nope.
NOTTY: I don't think I have, no.
FOLO: No.
TOILET: Oh. Maybe you'd like to hear?
NOTTY: Sure.
TOILET: Ok, here goes. Once, a long time ago, this island was inhabited by guano miners. But soon the resupply ships that used to supply the islanders with things they needed, stopped coming.
TOILET: It was then that all the male inhabitants of the island started dying. It is said that the islands spirit killed them, for mining the guano that the spirit thought was his.
TOILET: Anyway, soon only one male remained. And he claimed himself the King of Clipperton, murdering everyone still alive on the island.
TOILET: But soon, he started seeing visions of a ghost far away in the distance, a ghost that looked angry or sad to him. He wanted not to see the ghost again, so he started going out at just nights.
TOILET: But the ghost still appeared to him, no matter how dark the night was. Over time, the ghost became clearer and closer, and the "King" started fearing for his life.
TOILET: One night, he went out, but didn't see the ghost any more. He had previously thought that if this happened, he'd be relieved, but he wasn't. Instead, he became more nervous than ever.
TOILET: He was sure that the ghost was following him, but every time he looked behind him, he saw nothing unusual. But then, the door of his shack shrieked and closed in a loud bang.
TOILET: "King" was now running for his life on an island where there was nowhere to run to. He was sure the ghost was the island's spirit coming to punish him for what he'd done.
TOILET: And suddenly, he stopped. Chills went through him as he stood there, too scared to breathe. And he heard a deep breath behind him. As he turned around, he-
TOILET: AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
NOTTY: OH SHIT WHAT
ENDER: AAAAAAAAARRRHHHHH!!!
FOLO: JESUS CHRIST-
TOILET: Ahahahahahaha! You should've seen the looks on your faces! Priceless!
FOLO: Wow, Toil. That's a good ghost story, especially when you're sitting in the dark like this in the location of the story.
ENDER: Indeed, you really scared me with that scream. Geez!
NOTTY: I've never been more scare-
FOLO: Hey, guys, what's that over there?
NOTTY: ...
TOILET: Yeah, right, I'm not falling for that one. It was a ghost story, it's not real.
FOLO: No, I'm serious, guys. I saw something over there.
ENDER: ...
FOLO: It's gone now...
UNKNOWN VOICE: [HEAVY BREATH]
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First of all I want to say these stories were incredibly awesome. Youa ll did a great job.
The winners if this challenge are... [BCOLOR=#33cccc]Elsa Tribe [/BCOLOR]and [BCOLOR=#00ff00]Fighting Potatoes Tribe[/BCOLOR].
I'll explain the reasons. Elsa Tribe won thanks to their ending. It started okay to me. I thought it was going to be those cliche stories where they're all stting around a fire telling a story. But the end got me. It accomplished what I asked. Which was to give that scary factor.
Fighting Potatoes won thanks to all the weird and mysterious things that were happening to each one of them. People were suffering. The best part is that it never really explains what was causing that. Which makes it very scary. Also, the deaths are very creepy.
So congratulations Nottykitten, Toilet, Endersteve, Xfolo, Raxo, Alpha, Shanebat, Cronaldo and Faliara. For winning this challenge your Tribe won't have to vote out anyone. And you'll be taken on a Helicopter Ride around the Island.
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That means [BCOLOR=#ff00ff]Peaceful Pumpkins[/BCOLOR] and [BCOLOR=#ffff00]Kristoff Tribe[/BCOLOR] will have to vote out someone from their own Tribe.
Kristoff Tribe, you story was very interesting. I kind of Serial Killer/Crazy guy killing people. It was good but I didn't felt that scary factor in the story. Killing doesn't really makes a story creepy.
Peacful Pumpkins, if I had to choose a story to win (leaving out the scary factor) you guys would've won for sure. I erm... almost teared up. Friends fighting ro survive these things. All of them dying except one. The ending was very sad and perfect. But again, wheres the scary part? Very touching though!
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Here are the stories if you want to read them:
Elsa Tribe
TOILET: So have you guys heard of the story of the Clipperton Ghost?
ENDER: Nope.
NOTTY: I don't think I have, no.
FOLO: No.
TOILET: Oh. Maybe you'd like to hear?
NOTTY: Sure.
TOILET: Ok, here goes. Once, a long time ago, this island was inhabited by guano miners. But soon the resupply ships that used to supply the islanders with things they needed, stopped coming.
TOILET: It was then that all the male inhabitants of the island started dying. It is said that the islands spirit killed them, for mining the guano that the spirit thought was his.
TOILET: Anyway, soon only one male remained. And he claimed himself the King of Clipperton, murdering everyone still alive on the island.
TOILET: But soon, he started seeing visions of a ghost far away in the distance, a ghost that looked angry or sad to him. He wanted not to see the ghost again, so he started going out at just nights.
TOILET: But the ghost still appeared to him, no matter how dark the night was. Over time, the ghost became clearer and closer, and the "King" started fearing for his life.
TOILET: One night, he went out, but didn't see the ghost any more. He had previously thought that if this happened, he'd be relieved, but he wasn't. Instead, he became more nervous than ever.
TOILET: He was sure that the ghost was following him, but every time he looked behind him, he saw nothing unusual. But then, the door of his shack shrieked and closed in a loud bang.
TOILET: "King" was now running for his life on an island where there was nowhere to run to. He was sure the ghost was the island's spirit coming to punish him for what he'd done.
TOILET: And suddenly, he stopped. Chills went through him as he stood there, too scared to breathe. And he heard a deep breath behind him. As he turned around, he-
TOILET: AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
NOTTY: OH SHIT WHAT
ENDER: AAAAAAAAARRRHHHHH!!!
FOLO: JESUS CHRIST-
TOILET: Ahahahahahaha! You should've seen the looks on your faces! Priceless!
FOLO: Wow, Toil. That's a good ghost story, especially when you're sitting in the dark like this in the location of the story.
ENDER: Indeed, you really scared me with that scream. Geez!
NOTTY: I've never been more scare-
FOLO: Hey, guys, what's that over there?
NOTTY: ...
TOILET: Yeah, right, I'm not falling for that one. It was a ghost story, it's not real.
FOLO: No, I'm serious, guys. I saw something over there.
ENDER: ...
FOLO: It's gone now...
UNKNOWN VOICE: [HEAVY BREATH]
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Kristoff Tribe
Fruit: Oh man, it is still so cold in here, I'm freezing!
Digi: We can't stay in here for long. They'll find us!
Fruit: Oh come on, look at all this ice cream we can have for ourselves!
ealev opens door to
ealev: What're you two doing in there? Whoa!
Someone slams the door
ealev: Who did that?
Fruit attempts to open door and the handle breaks off
Fruit: Well great, now we're stuck in here. We're gonna freeze to death if someone doesn't find us.
ealev: We're not going to be found till morning, I was the only one here checking around the building before locking up when I found you two.
Digi: Well then who closed the door?
The three of them stare at each other in fear.
Digi: HELP! Someone please help us!
Fruit quickly covers Digi's mouth.
Fruit: Shut up! You're panicking for nothing, no one can hear you. And whatever does hear you, you will wish it hadn’t.
Love's maniacal laugh echoes down the hall outside the ice cream freezer. The lights go out in the freezer, Fruit and Digi hold on close to each other. The lights come back on, and ealev is in the middle of the room, handing dead.
Fruit: OH GOD!
Digi: ALL WE WANTED WAS SOME ICE CREAM!
Love's voice can be heard, but he is no where to be seen
Love: Oh don't worry, you will get your ice cream, maybe not in the way you intended, but you will get your ice cream.
Fruit: Where are you! Show yourself!
Lights go out again. When the lights come back on, Digi is gone.
Fruit: Digi? ... Digi?! ... DIGI??!?!
There is no answer. Lights go out again. And when they come back on, Love stands before Fruit. Fruit, tries to attack, but cannot move, Love has injected him with some type of drug.
Love: Hello Fruit.
Fruit: How do you...
But Fruit is too weak to finish his sentence. Love disappears behind Fruit. Fruit hears Love struggling with something, possibly carry an object. Then Love dumps Digi's dead body over Fruit onto his lap.
Fruit: Digi... digi...
Fruit is very scared, but he is too weak to show it.
Fruit: Why...
Love: Why? You want to know why? Well, I suppose I can tell you. I get a thrill from having power over people. I killed your friends without a problem, don't you think that's fun?
Fruit begins to feel a bit of strength from his anger.
Fruit: Is that because you are so weak you have to find cheap ways to overcome people? You coward!
Love kicks Fruit in the face.
Love: Shut up. And there is another reason I'm here, and that's you Fruit. I've been following you, waiting for the perfect moment. When I heard about your little ice cream idea, I knew it would be perfect timing.
Fruit: But why... why me?
Love: You really don't know?
Fruit: I don't even know who you are.
Love: Well you ought to. In fact, that's part of the reason why I'm doing this. Three years ago, we were in college together. It was at the party the day after finals our freshman year. You and your buddies, who recently died in that car "accident" took me into the back room, stripped me down to my underwear, forcing me to run through the party and all the way home in my underwear.
Fruit: That was you?
Love kicks Fruit in the head again.
Love: Damn right it was. And now you are going to pay.
Love pulls out a long, slender knife.
Love: Good bye Fruit.
Love stabs Fruit in the throat, killing him instantly. He then goes to chop up the bodies with a large butcher knife. He chops all three bodies into very small pieces. He then empties all of the ice cream cartons into a large freezer he has with him. He then takes the victims' body parts, and fills the ice cream cartons back up with them.
Love: I told them they'd get their ice cream...
Love mops up all of the blood on the floor, and slips out just 15 minutes before the store would open up.
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Fruit: Oh man, it is still so cold in here, I'm freezing!
Digi: We can't stay in here for long. They'll find us!
Fruit: Oh come on, look at all this ice cream we can have for ourselves!
ealev opens door to
ealev: What're you two doing in there? Whoa!
Someone slams the door
ealev: Who did that?
Fruit attempts to open door and the handle breaks off
Fruit: Well great, now we're stuck in here. We're gonna freeze to death if someone doesn't find us.
ealev: We're not going to be found till morning, I was the only one here checking around the building before locking up when I found you two.
Digi: Well then who closed the door?
The three of them stare at each other in fear.
Digi: HELP! Someone please help us!
Fruit quickly covers Digi's mouth.
Fruit: Shut up! You're panicking for nothing, no one can hear you. And whatever does hear you, you will wish it hadn’t.
Love's maniacal laugh echoes down the hall outside the ice cream freezer. The lights go out in the freezer, Fruit and Digi hold on close to each other. The lights come back on, and ealev is in the middle of the room, handing dead.
Fruit: OH GOD!
Digi: ALL WE WANTED WAS SOME ICE CREAM!
Love's voice can be heard, but he is no where to be seen
Love: Oh don't worry, you will get your ice cream, maybe not in the way you intended, but you will get your ice cream.
Fruit: Where are you! Show yourself!
Lights go out again. When the lights come back on, Digi is gone.
Fruit: Digi? ... Digi?! ... DIGI??!?!
There is no answer. Lights go out again. And when they come back on, Love stands before Fruit. Fruit, tries to attack, but cannot move, Love has injected him with some type of drug.
Love: Hello Fruit.
Fruit: How do you...
But Fruit is too weak to finish his sentence. Love disappears behind Fruit. Fruit hears Love struggling with something, possibly carry an object. Then Love dumps Digi's dead body over Fruit onto his lap.
Fruit: Digi... digi...
Fruit is very scared, but he is too weak to show it.
Fruit: Why...
Love: Why? You want to know why? Well, I suppose I can tell you. I get a thrill from having power over people. I killed your friends without a problem, don't you think that's fun?
Fruit begins to feel a bit of strength from his anger.
Fruit: Is that because you are so weak you have to find cheap ways to overcome people? You coward!
Love kicks Fruit in the face.
Love: Shut up. And there is another reason I'm here, and that's you Fruit. I've been following you, waiting for the perfect moment. When I heard about your little ice cream idea, I knew it would be perfect timing.
Fruit: But why... why me?
Love: You really don't know?
Fruit: I don't even know who you are.
Love: Well you ought to. In fact, that's part of the reason why I'm doing this. Three years ago, we were in college together. It was at the party the day after finals our freshman year. You and your buddies, who recently died in that car "accident" took me into the back room, stripped me down to my underwear, forcing me to run through the party and all the way home in my underwear.
Fruit: That was you?
Love kicks Fruit in the head again.
Love: Damn right it was. And now you are going to pay.
Love pulls out a long, slender knife.
Love: Good bye Fruit.
Love stabs Fruit in the throat, killing him instantly. He then goes to chop up the bodies with a large butcher knife. He chops all three bodies into very small pieces. He then empties all of the ice cream cartons into a large freezer he has with him. He then takes the victims' body parts, and fills the ice cream cartons back up with them.
Love: I told them they'd get their ice cream...
Love mops up all of the blood on the floor, and slips out just 15 minutes before the store would open up.
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Fighting Potatoes
Alpha102: I'm feeling very light, my voice feels softer than before. What is happening to us?
raxo2222: No idea... I think im becoming radioactive- LOOK AT NIGHT SKY! Stars are disappearing one by one!
Shane: Where did everyone else in the town go? It feels so.. Eerie and silent, as if even the ground and sky has died.
CRon: I know what you're saying! I mean, normally, on Friday evening, it would be party city, but, now, there's nothing.... not even crickets.
Faliara: Guys... Help...
Alpha102: Faliara!? What's happening? Are you okay?
raxo2222: Cronaldo... you are starting to disappear!
Faliara: Can't... Breathe...
Alpha102: I'm starting to feel abnormal... my body feels cold.
CRon: ummmm Alpha.... Did you just see that?
Alpha102: That's not right at all. I saw a flash of darkness. My hand looks transparent. I'm going to die.
CRonaldo727: Considering that you appear to be intangible.... Dying would kinda be a preferred option....
*Collapses*
raxo2222 sees, as cronaldo dies, gets respawned to get killed and respawned again.
Shane: Guys where the hell did my arm go?
Faliara continues to cough violently, suffocating but still doesn't die, stuck in an infinite hour of torture.
CRonaldo: Unggggggg.... *starts drooling*
raxo2222: look! temperature is falling very fastt - aaattmmoossffeerreee iisss gettttiiinnnggg liiiquuuiiifeeeeeee......
Faliara finally dies, others alerted only by the thunk of her head hitting the ground.
CRonaldo starts spasming violently!
raxo2222 fades away to nothing....
Shanebat combusts spontaneusely!
Alpha102 looks around to see everyone gone, and puts a hand out to try to reach forward. Alpha102 ends up stuck in a state of permanent paralysis.
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Peaceful Pumpkins
Alpha102: I'm feeling very light, my voice feels softer than before. What is happening to us?
raxo2222: No idea... I think im becoming radioactive- LOOK AT NIGHT SKY! Stars are disappearing one by one!
Shane: Where did everyone else in the town go? It feels so.. Eerie and silent, as if even the ground and sky has died.
CRon: I know what you're saying! I mean, normally, on Friday evening, it would be party city, but, now, there's nothing.... not even crickets.
Faliara: Guys... Help...
Alpha102: Faliara!? What's happening? Are you okay?
raxo2222: Cronaldo... you are starting to disappear!
Faliara: Can't... Breathe...
Alpha102: I'm starting to feel abnormal... my body feels cold.
CRon: ummmm Alpha.... Did you just see that?
Alpha102: That's not right at all. I saw a flash of darkness. My hand looks transparent. I'm going to die.
CRonaldo727: Considering that you appear to be intangible.... Dying would kinda be a preferred option....
*Collapses*
raxo2222 sees, as cronaldo dies, gets respawned to get killed and respawned again.
Shane: Guys where the hell did my arm go?
Faliara continues to cough violently, suffocating but still doesn't die, stuck in an infinite hour of torture.
CRonaldo: Unggggggg.... *starts drooling*
raxo2222: look! temperature is falling very fastt - aaattmmoossffeerreee iisss gettttiiinnnggg liiiquuuiiifeeeeeee......
Faliara finally dies, others alerted only by the thunk of her head hitting the ground.
CRonaldo starts spasming violently!
raxo2222 fades away to nothing....
Shanebat combusts spontaneusely!
Alpha102 looks around to see everyone gone, and puts a hand out to try to reach forward. Alpha102 ends up stuck in a state of permanent paralysis.
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Peaceful Pumpkins
The group moves slowly through the abandoned street. Smoke billowing from the surrounding forests, houses all aroung them beared shattered windows and doors bombarded off their hinges. Cars, trucks and bikes were strewed all over the place; flipped, burnt out, doggy-piling on top of each other or all three. Armed with their weapons, the group make their way towards the city cautiously...
SmoggyWaffles- What's that!? Over there behind the fence!
Ooglie101 - Probably nothing. Stop freaking out at every little thing!
SmoggyWaffles - I'm sorry... I just can't help it now. With everything that I have seen in the past few days, I just. Can't. Control it.
Kallie_S - *Sighs, holding back tears*; I miss them.. All... I miss Raxo, I miss Notty, I miss Toilet and Fali.. I even miss storrmmm.
SmoggyWaffles - You don't know he's gone yet. You don't know if he has turned. Who knows? Maybe he's bunkered down in a house or something. Just keep wishing for the best?
*Kallie begins to break down, emitting ominous, screeches that echo all around. She falls to the ground shaking violently, still crying. Her BT-99 SHOTGUN falling to the cracked tar road.* Nonononononono! *Screams* I'M SORRY!
Ooglie101 - Shut up you fool! they'll hear us! Shut her up. NOW!
SmoggyWaffles - You can't talk to her like that! Give her a break! She's gone through a lot. We all have!
Ooglie101 - I don't care what you've gone through! If you don't shut her up, I will.
*PULLS GUN ON KALLIE*
In a moment of silence, no sobs from Kallie, farmiliar noises can be heard. Almost growls. Grunts. Shadows start emerging from under cars, behind fences and out of open house doors. Stumbling, crawling and limping their way slowly (but surely) towards the group. A heard makes it's way from the behind and several being to appear, as ants, walking from both ends of the T-Section fifty metres ahead.
*KALLIE SCREAMING LOUDLY AND UNCONTROLLABLY IN BACKGROUND* I didn't mean to! Quick! Kill them! Shoot!
Ooglie101 - Look what you did, you idiot! You've attracted the spooks, and they're gonna kill you!
SmoggyWaflles - Leave her alone! *runs towards nearest spook, and pulls trigger of shotgun, letting loose a bullet into it's eyeball*. JUST HELP ME CLEAR A FEW! SHE IS EMACIATED, WE NEED TO STICK TOGETHER AND IF THAT MEANS PROTECTING THE WEAKEST, THAT IS WHAT WE DO.
Kallie_S - *Still crying, she sits up and reaches for her gun* Thank you, Smoggy..
Ooglie101 - Ugh. Whatever, *Running towards two spooks, one crawling without legs and the other walking with a limp* At least we know, *Pushes walking spook over*, that you two, *jumps on crawling spook's head, guts squelching under his steel -cap boots*, still have your sanity. Well Smoggy anyway.
Kallie- *shoots wildly at the spooks dropping everyone with outstanding accuracy, tears running down her face* (to herself)- He's still alive. Storm is still alive. Storm is just hiding, waiting for the right moment to show himself and save the da-...
*Both Ooglie and Smoggy turn to see what all of the sudden silence is about*
SmoggyWaffles - Oh no...
Ooglie101 - You're shittin' me...
Kallie_S - NO! AAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHH! *stands up, pulls out her knife and sprints towards the spooks behind her, showing the blade deep into each skull as she passes it*
*Smoggy follows closely behind her, ensuring she doesn't run into trouble*. I'LL KILL YOU ALL!
smoggywaffles - Kallie! Come back! We need you here!
*In front of Ooglie, a single spook walks towards him, a tattered hunting vest sags to the left of his chest.*
Ooglie- A chunk of your top-hair has been ripped from your head, exposing what is now flesh and skull bone. a large chunk of flesh and skin from the hull of your neck has been ripped away too, oozing blood and a green odourous substance from the gash. Your legs and arms are the in the same state I guess, several bite marks and huge chunks of skin and muscle tissue ripped off, exposing bone, with small, shrivelled veins hanging to the ground. Everything looks exactly as it had, three days ago, but now... deader? It's you, Storm. She was so sure you were alive... But I can't just leave you here. Can I?
storm - *grunts and lurches forward, falling at ooglie's feet* urrrrrhhhhhgggg..
Ooglie - I guess i have to..
*Scream echoes in background*
Smoggy- HEEEELLLP!
*ooglie sprints to screaming*
smoggy- Jush shoot! *stabs one spook and shoots two simultaneously* KALLIE WATCH OUT!
Kallie- *attempting to pull her knife out of a spook's head, only to be bitten from behind by another*
AAAAAGGGGHH! My shoulder! Help! *falls to ground shaking as spook falls on top of her and bites her neck*.
Smoggy - Kallie! *shoots bullet into spook's head*, Kallie are you alright?! Can you hear me? Deep breaths, it's going to be okay! Okay?
*Ooglie looks over his shoulder at Kallie's limpening eyes*
kallie- Sm-Sm-Smoog-...*dies as green pus begins to ooze from her bites*.
ooglie- *realises she is dead as smoggy cries*. Smoggy.. smoggy. We have to go, they're coming. We have to move.
*pulling him up by his shoulders*.
Smoggy- fine. Just let me save her. Let me keep her from re-rising.
*Ooglie nods and turns to start to walk away*.* gun shot fires from behind as he turn to beckon Smoggy*
Ooglie- no.. NOO! NOO! *smoggy's body lay limp hunched over Kallie's soon-to-be-spook corpse, blood trickling down his eye*.
ooglie- *crying and heaving* good-goodbye guys. I'll-I will miss you..
*breaking off in an incredulous sprint, he begins to let shots loose at straggling spooks. He reaches the end of the street within seconds and takes one last look at the tragedy behind him, only to see two spooks crouching, over a body. His three friends in one final moment. Kallie and Storm spooks feasting on the limp remains of Smoggy.*
Ooglie- farewell guys.
He never looked back.
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SmoggyWaffles- What's that!? Over there behind the fence!
Ooglie101 - Probably nothing. Stop freaking out at every little thing!
SmoggyWaffles - I'm sorry... I just can't help it now. With everything that I have seen in the past few days, I just. Can't. Control it.
Kallie_S - *Sighs, holding back tears*; I miss them.. All... I miss Raxo, I miss Notty, I miss Toilet and Fali.. I even miss storrmmm.
SmoggyWaffles - You don't know he's gone yet. You don't know if he has turned. Who knows? Maybe he's bunkered down in a house or something. Just keep wishing for the best?
*Kallie begins to break down, emitting ominous, screeches that echo all around. She falls to the ground shaking violently, still crying. Her BT-99 SHOTGUN falling to the cracked tar road.* Nonononononono! *Screams* I'M SORRY!
Ooglie101 - Shut up you fool! they'll hear us! Shut her up. NOW!
SmoggyWaffles - You can't talk to her like that! Give her a break! She's gone through a lot. We all have!
Ooglie101 - I don't care what you've gone through! If you don't shut her up, I will.
*PULLS GUN ON KALLIE*
In a moment of silence, no sobs from Kallie, farmiliar noises can be heard. Almost growls. Grunts. Shadows start emerging from under cars, behind fences and out of open house doors. Stumbling, crawling and limping their way slowly (but surely) towards the group. A heard makes it's way from the behind and several being to appear, as ants, walking from both ends of the T-Section fifty metres ahead.
*KALLIE SCREAMING LOUDLY AND UNCONTROLLABLY IN BACKGROUND* I didn't mean to! Quick! Kill them! Shoot!
Ooglie101 - Look what you did, you idiot! You've attracted the spooks, and they're gonna kill you!
SmoggyWaflles - Leave her alone! *runs towards nearest spook, and pulls trigger of shotgun, letting loose a bullet into it's eyeball*. JUST HELP ME CLEAR A FEW! SHE IS EMACIATED, WE NEED TO STICK TOGETHER AND IF THAT MEANS PROTECTING THE WEAKEST, THAT IS WHAT WE DO.
Kallie_S - *Still crying, she sits up and reaches for her gun* Thank you, Smoggy..
Ooglie101 - Ugh. Whatever, *Running towards two spooks, one crawling without legs and the other walking with a limp* At least we know, *Pushes walking spook over*, that you two, *jumps on crawling spook's head, guts squelching under his steel -cap boots*, still have your sanity. Well Smoggy anyway.
Kallie- *shoots wildly at the spooks dropping everyone with outstanding accuracy, tears running down her face* (to herself)- He's still alive. Storm is still alive. Storm is just hiding, waiting for the right moment to show himself and save the da-...
*Both Ooglie and Smoggy turn to see what all of the sudden silence is about*
SmoggyWaffles - Oh no...
Ooglie101 - You're shittin' me...
Kallie_S - NO! AAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHH! *stands up, pulls out her knife and sprints towards the spooks behind her, showing the blade deep into each skull as she passes it*
*Smoggy follows closely behind her, ensuring she doesn't run into trouble*. I'LL KILL YOU ALL!
smoggywaffles - Kallie! Come back! We need you here!
*In front of Ooglie, a single spook walks towards him, a tattered hunting vest sags to the left of his chest.*
Ooglie- A chunk of your top-hair has been ripped from your head, exposing what is now flesh and skull bone. a large chunk of flesh and skin from the hull of your neck has been ripped away too, oozing blood and a green odourous substance from the gash. Your legs and arms are the in the same state I guess, several bite marks and huge chunks of skin and muscle tissue ripped off, exposing bone, with small, shrivelled veins hanging to the ground. Everything looks exactly as it had, three days ago, but now... deader? It's you, Storm. She was so sure you were alive... But I can't just leave you here. Can I?
storm - *grunts and lurches forward, falling at ooglie's feet* urrrrrhhhhhgggg..
Ooglie - I guess i have to..
*Scream echoes in background*
Smoggy- HEEEELLLP!
*ooglie sprints to screaming*
smoggy- Jush shoot! *stabs one spook and shoots two simultaneously* KALLIE WATCH OUT!
Kallie- *attempting to pull her knife out of a spook's head, only to be bitten from behind by another*
AAAAAGGGGHH! My shoulder! Help! *falls to ground shaking as spook falls on top of her and bites her neck*.
Smoggy - Kallie! *shoots bullet into spook's head*, Kallie are you alright?! Can you hear me? Deep breaths, it's going to be okay! Okay?
*Ooglie looks over his shoulder at Kallie's limpening eyes*
kallie- Sm-Sm-Smoog-...*dies as green pus begins to ooze from her bites*.
ooglie- *realises she is dead as smoggy cries*. Smoggy.. smoggy. We have to go, they're coming. We have to move.
*pulling him up by his shoulders*.
Smoggy- fine. Just let me save her. Let me keep her from re-rising.
*Ooglie nods and turns to start to walk away*.* gun shot fires from behind as he turn to beckon Smoggy*
Ooglie- no.. NOO! NOO! *smoggy's body lay limp hunched over Kallie's soon-to-be-spook corpse, blood trickling down his eye*.
ooglie- *crying and heaving* good-goodbye guys. I'll-I will miss you..
*breaking off in an incredulous sprint, he begins to let shots loose at straggling spooks. He reaches the end of the street within seconds and takes one last look at the tragedy behind him, only to see two spooks crouching, over a body. His three friends in one final moment. Kallie and Storm spooks feasting on the limp remains of Smoggy.*
Ooglie- farewell guys.
He never looked back.
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Send me a PM with the name of the Survivor you wish to vote out.
Good luck.
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Enderfive
sarcasm incarnate
Unknown is the scariest, if you know what's going on, you don't feel much. I wrote our story at midnight, sitting in the dark and I have a very vivid imagination sometimes, especially when I think of scary things. Your mind is what creates the monsters and all the horrible things that happen. The more is left for you to make up, the more horrible things you'll manage to make up. So, needless to say, I felt a couple of chills down my back when I wrote it. In my eyes, that was enough to count as a scary story. Apparently, anso thought likewise c:
Enderfive
sarcasm incarnate
As a side note, look up Clipperton's history on Wikipedia or something. I'm sure you may find some... similarities with my story. well, very loose similarities, but similarities nonetheless.
Ansoro2112
Hottie
Okay, I went back to read what I wrote when I posted the challenge. I wasn't 100% clear.
This is what I wanted:
Ansoro: Hello
Alex: How are you?
Ansoro: Good. You?
Alex: I'm good. Thank you.
What I didn't want:
*Ansoro runs towards Alex*
Ansoro: Hello
*Alex turns around*
Alex: How are you?
Again, I wasn't clear about that. So I'm not changing anything since it was my fault. Plus, dialogues does have both people talking and it does explain what's happening around them. Since I wasn't clear then I'll count both of them.
So results will stay the same.
Ansoro: Hello
Alex: How are you?
Ansoro: Good. You?
Alex: I'm good. Thank you.
What I didn't want:
*Ansoro runs towards Alex*
Ansoro: Hello
*Alex turns around*
Alex: How are you?
Again, I wasn't clear about that. So I'm not changing anything since it was my fault. Plus, dialogues does have both people talking and it does explain what's happening around them. Since I wasn't clear then I'll count both of them.
So results will stay the same.
Ansoro2112
Hottie
Results
The Survivors who received the most votes against and are in danger of leaving Survivor are... @storm886 and @ealev
The Survivors who received the most votes against and are in danger of leaving Survivor are... @storm886 and @ealev
Storm received 3 votes
Ealev received 3 votes
Fruit received 1 vote
Ooglie received 1 vote
Duel #4
Ealev vs. Storm886
I'll be giving each of you maps with coordinates to these caves. You need to choose which one to go to. 3 caves have immunity inside of it. 1 has a special immunity. And the other ones are empty. Choose wisely.
Post your cave number in this same thread.
Good luck.
Ealev received 3 votes
Fruit received 1 vote
Ooglie received 1 vote
Duel #4
Ealev vs. Storm886
I'll be giving each of you maps with coordinates to these caves. You need to choose which one to go to. 3 caves have immunity inside of it. 1 has a special immunity. And the other ones are empty. Choose wisely.
Post your cave number in this same thread.
Good luck.
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