The Infection

[MarsKid]

I'm already planning for another story (much longer this time). I'd appreciate it if you guys could offer some critique on the story and things that you liked.

 

[balloon98]

I'm already planning for another story (much longer this time). I'd appreciate it if you guys could offer some critique on the story and things that you liked.

:D YESH now my favorite character(s) was Trent his life is kinda like mine and then I also like Harry and Tyler always the person that steps up. As for an idea to the sequel I think you should have it with one of the students be the infecter (Like harry or the Michael) just my opinion

 

[MarsKid]

Well I can't do that because they were blown up, and before then Michael and Harry were both killed, not infected.

 

[balloon98]

Well I can't do that because they were blown up, and before then Michael and Harry were both killed, not infected.

oh thats true...

 

[Illusionist]

@MarsKid The website got turned-off/deleted and I was on chapter 6 :/( I liked Tyler and Hannah as the characters)

Even though I read 5 chapters the story itself is very interesting and exciting. You are a preety good writer.
All I can say good luck on your next story.

 

[MarsKid]

I learned today the website was shut down. Ugh.

I'll try reposting the story here.

 

[Jayfeather]

I learned today the website was shut down. Ugh.

I'll try reposting the story here.

I wondered why you didn't have it here

 

[Dragosh]

I hope you saved it. I want to read it.

 

[MarsKid]

The problem: this website will not allow me to make large story posts. I'll start uploading the story to deviantART if I can.

E D I T : The full story is on my deviantART account! http://irhaxor.deviantart.com/

 

[kraby1]

Damn, how do you do it ;-;

I can't even start writing.
I have the writer's block.

 

[MarsKid]

I had that too. It just takes time to get out. Gotta arrange your thoughts and such before writing or you'll get writer's block right off the bat. The Infection was something I had planned on for a while. You just need to be prepared before jumping in.

 

[MarsKid]

Sorry for the bump and double-post, but I really need some C&C. If you can, please answer:

Who were your favorite characters? (explain)

Who were your least favorite characters? (explain)

What was your favorite part? (explain)

Least favorite part? (explain)

What was the best thing about the story? (explain)

Story rating 1-10?

Thanks in advance.

 

[Gamer_740]

I Read this when It first came out so I might forgot

Who were your favorite characters? The Characters that lived through out.

Who were your least favorite characters? Forgot

What was your favorite part? When they blow up the school

Least favorite part? LEAST FAVORVITE?? it was all good to me

What was the best thing about the story? the plot

Story rating 1-10? 9

 

[Duffie]

xNoobSniperx

Dude, what's with the overuse of adding 'Dumb' to every post? .-.

That feels a bit abusive, in my opinion.

Anyways, I feel like I should reread this story.

 

[MarsKid]

Whoever he is I'd like him to stop.

 

[Duffie]

Whoever he is I'd like him to stop.

http://blocktopia.net/forum/members/xnoobsniperx.2603/

GmK, is there anything we can do about this?