[I'm a bit confused... when did Duffie ever land on the warlord's ship, and being that her vessel is full of explosives why not just detonate on contact? And if Duffie and Durwin had to pass through a barrier, why didn't DK and how did he get on the ship? Maybe it's cause it's still too early for my brain but it's still confusing :S ]
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Duffie looked worriedly at the ship, then back at the Durwin. Seeing as he was distracting the enemy, she knew it was her responsibility to get onto the ship.
Standing up, she bolted for the bridge leading to the deck of the ship, attempting to process a plan that will aid them, as well as keep them alive.
2. [It's a different ship that has the explosives on it. It's not even near the Officer's ships.]
3. [I'm not on the ship now, Crothar jumped off it. It's just the size of a large room, not like a huge hulking behemoth.]
4. [Well I derped on the barriers, but you've managed to do some other stuff I let you get by with :3]
[Alright well here goes...I'm the StoryMaster. I'm trying to tie up some loose ends so that you guys can continue to progress while I'm in Europe. You guys just keep going on like you were before I ever got here, so
Jolteon42 I can't do the part you want me to do. After you guys finish the battle, you're welcome to make a new season if you wish and continue on with the adventure. I'll be back again in July. Have fun guys!]
[Notes:
Refresh100 's army and Sariel's Demon friends haven't arrived yet, so make sure to include them into the story if you wish.]
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