'The cranky old man who lives down the street' is actually a student in Class Neptune. I already said to Mintie, age doesn't count.Where's the cranky old man who lives down the street? But this is pretty good I'm enjoying this Faliara keep it up!
'The cranky old man who lives down the street' is actually a student in Class Neptune. I already said to Mintie, age doesn't count.Where's the cranky old man who lives down the street? But this is pretty good I'm enjoying this Faliara keep it up!
Oh well it's a good thing I'm Captain Falcon then isn't it :D'The cranky old man who lives down the street' is actually a student in Class Neptune. I already said to Mintie, age doesn't count.
Oh well it's a good thing I'm Captain Falcon then isn't it :D
good thing I'm Captain Falcon then isn't it :D
I'm Captain Falcon then isn't it :D
YOU'RE THE CRANKY OLD MAN.I'm Captain Falcon
Thanks for putting up the day for me :)It actually sort of smelled like barf with a side of fish. I soon threw mine away as Fal decided it wasn't worth eating either.
These eggs are nasty c: Since it was school foodThanks for putting up the day for me :)
Although, there's one thing you got wrong. I LOVE eggs. I'd only throw out the bacon.
Oh Fal<3 Okay! :)I dun really care, as long as it's eggs :/
It won't work for anything other than your own computer. You're trying to link to a local file, but in order for us to see it you have to upload it to an image-sharing site such as Imgur and then embed it into your post.C:\Users\Public\Pictures\Sample Pictures\treehouse layout.png
(And, by the way, copy that link and paste it on a new tab, and then try. I tried it; it works for me. If it doesn't work, tell me. If it does, tell me anyway so I know it works for everyone else :))
;-; Oh, ok...It won't work for anything other than your own computer. You're trying to link to a local file, but in order for us to see it you have to upload it to an image-sharing site such as Imgur and then embed it into your post.
LOL I KNOW I WAS IN A HURRY AND I HAD TO GO TO SCHOOL. I KNOW IT SUCKED K. c:DarkHender
For someone who's suppose to be bad at this, it's really good ^_^. I almost don't want to give my writers opinion. But, I will. Characterization was good, Details: a bit lacking, I feel as though you wrote it a bit too quickly. Try to variate your words more such as using remarked instead of 'Replied' or having actions go with your words. 8/10
I'M SORRY I REALLY DID LOVE IT THOUGH!