She saw that they still didnt know who she was, she interduced herself, "I am Vio! Servent of the Godess Palutena, the godess of light!!! and i'm here to defeat Hades then go on to slay herobrine!" she said triumphantly.
(( If she doesn't know who she was, how does she know who she was? .-. ))She saw that they still didnt know who she was, she interduced herself, "I am Vio! Servent of the Godess Palutena, the godess of light!!! and i'm here to defeat Hades then go on to slay herobrine!" she said triumphantly.
She saw that they still didnt know who she was, she interduced herself, "I am Vio! Servent of the Godess Palutena, the godess of light!!! and i'm here to defeat Hades then go on to slay herobrine!" she said triumphantly.
She saw that they still didn't know who she was
(( Contradiction. How can you introduce yourself if you do not know who you are?she introduced herself
[wat. I'm not in the palace. >.<]Vio just shaked her head sadly, "This world doesnt know whats keeping them on the surface of order... back on... "she saw something, only something she read in scrolls, "was that the? no. it couldnt be..." She looked back down to the group and relized they were in a different room, then she noticed the same person she saw before, "You got any other insults to say? and whats that in your hand?! well anyway, why are you here?"
????????????? [please read the story!!!!]Outside the palace, the kid left her mom and ran torwards Vio, "Help me!! I saw Herobrine!!" Vio looked back at the kid at the middle of the arguement and almost got stabbed, Vio did a disarming teqnuiqe and threw it at his other hand, the bread flew out and he yelled in pain, guards noticed and Vio melted into the shadows and headed torwards the group.
[you just have to base your characters actions of what your character actually sees. You can't use information that wouldn't be given to them. Everyone knows that I am semi-evil, but your characters don't]Ok, Im gonna quit for a while... until i read all of it, then ill sart agian... im sorry about all the problems... cya, maybe...